Hey Guys


Try a new strategy shared in class
Draw a picture

Pay attention to punctuation
Make a picture or mental image
Make text to self Conextions
4. Cross Checking *does it look right

*does it sound right

*does it make sense

5. Use my schema to make connections

6. Viserlying

7. Use adjectives


  1. I draw pictures with lots of detail to flesh out my ideas
  2. I think small and focus on a moment
  3. I am a risk taker and try new things
  4. I group similar thoughts together
  5. My writing is fun to read
  6. Use adjectives in writing

Do you love books I do come and read this!!!

Hey Everyone

This week is book week! Do you know why I love book week!?! I LOVE it because I love books!! I could read for ever!!! If you don’t know what book week is I will tell you now!! So book week is when you make your door to your classroom well you make it like it is a book! My classroom was the hungry caterpillar! My favourite classroom was prep Ds class! I liked this one the most was because it was a different door that not many people will think of! I found that it was very clear! I’m glad that you put there faces on the Bears!  Well done guys! This is the photo!!

Go look at there website: http://jessmcintyre.global2.vic.edu.au




Look at the video

What you will need

One plastic cup


bicarb soda



food dye

citric acid


  1. Put bicarb soda into a cup 2 spoon falls
  2. put oil into the same cup and fill to the first line!
  3. Add vinegar into the same cup 2 spoon falls
  4. Last of all add 2 drops of food dye



  1. Put citric acid into a snap lock bag teaspoon
  2. put a teaspoon of water
  3.  Bicarb soda teaspoon


Hey guys

Another week talking to ya! Hope your week has been better then um…. AMAZING! (I now that didn’t make sense) So today I am going to talk you about Sci-fi/ Science fiction! So in class we have to make a story that has science fiction! I am writing a story about a person named bob and they get sucked into a pac-man game! So I am just starting a good story I think!! 🙃

This is science fiction because science fiction is something that can happen in the future or that involves with space ships!! I will tell you some movies that have science fiction in it! Star Wars, back to the future AND WAY MORE (I will be going on forever if I kept on going!)

Once I am done I will be happy to let you know! 🤗


Demon Dentist


I haven’t talked to you in ages! Hope you guys loved your holidays!! So let’s get started! I have been reading the best book in the history of the world!!! It’s called DEMON DENTIST! David Walliams wrote this amazing book. And guess what I have read 194 pages in the past week that is how much I love it!!😍 I will tell you the blurb: Darkness had come to the town. Strange things were happening in the dead of night. Children would put a tooth under their pillow for the tooth fairy, but in the but in the morning they will wake up to find…a dead slug a live spider hundreds of earwigs creeping and crawling beneath their pillow! Evil was at work. But who or what was behind it? I hope you enjoyed that (I got chills ) If you get a chance please have a read it so gooooood! That’s all for me today so I will see you later Bye!!!

Our (amazing) Yarn

Hey guys,

So this week we did a yarn, so you may not know what a yarn is but no worries I will tell you…  So it’s like acting using a diffenet voice, so as you know from the biography I was William Bligh if you haven’t read it go read it now! So as you may have guessed I wasn’t the only one doing it all of grade fives did it!! I will show you soon! So what we did was we have to talk in a accident William Bligh has a deep deep voice so I found it very hard to do!!! Our teacher said we had to stay in character but I couldn’t be as good as some other people!

Ok guys that’s all for me today! BYE






Biography for William Bligh

My Biography for William Bligh.

This is William bligh….


Born on the 9th of September 1754. In that time he was the most meanest man living at that time!! But just because he is the meanest man alive it doesn’t mean he doesn’t have a family that cares for him! Yes he has a family!!! He even has a wife her name is Elizabeth. William also had EIGHT kids! Six kids and only two sons!

Daughters: Mary, Anne, Jane, Harriet Maria, Frances, Elizabeth.

Sons: William and Henry.

WOW right, big family! Would you believe if I said that William Bligh has his own quote well he does want to hear it? Here it is:

Adventure bay is a convenient and safe place for any number of ships to take in wood and water during the summer mouths but in the winter when the southerly winds are stong the surf on all of the shore makes the landing exceedingly troublesome.

William Bligh became Governor of the colony but no one liked him because in the day everyone could take as much land as they wanted and they would trad rum for it  and William wanted to stop that so everyone didn’t like that.

William Bligh might have been a bad guy but he is just like all of us. And guess what he also had his own house and that is when the soldiers same! William Bligh was very brave at the time when the soliders were out to get him. Oh I haven’t told you what happened when William Bligh was a wanted man so in the end  so they couldn’t stand William Bligh always hanging around everywhere so guess what they did my poor first daughter out there holing the guards back while I go hide and stuff thing I really need into me pockets. So I could hear my poor poor daughter screaming at the guards saying stuff like “leave me and my father alone.” It gave her father some time but not enough. The solgers ran in as fast as they could! There in the house…..but guess what no one knows what happens next!! But he did NOT die he came out. And became captain of his own ship. And guess what in the end he became……GOVERNOR BLIGH!!! Who had eight sons and daughters and a wife!! He went from the meanest man alive to captain of his own crew to Governor William Bligh!! But in the end he died of stomach cancer at 63! But that’s other story!